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Have a line,
Itíll be fine.
Itís so much fun,
Come on now Hun.
Youíll be on cloud nine,
Go on jusí one more line.

Now for this white powder,
Turn the music louder.
You start to feel the beat,
But whatís with all this heat?
Youíre sweating really bad,
You think youíre going mad.

Everythingís slowing down,
Whoís let in that clown?
Voices in your head,
Your face is bright red.
You fall to the floor,
Youíre not breathing no more.

You start to turn blue,
You jusí havenít a clue.
Your blood is everywhere,
Round ya nose, in ya hair.
The paramedics are here,
Checking your pulse with fear.

They shake their head,
Put you on their bed.
They cover your face,
Aní close their medicine case.
You had died,
Your mate had lied.

You was not fine,
From jusí one line.
You had dehydrated,
You shouldnít have waited.
You knew you needed a drink,
Now! Letís give that a think!

You was sixteen years of age,
Trapped in your own cage.
You had tried nearly every drug,
This one took you like a mug.
You always put others down,
You walked with a nasty frown.

Everyone wants you back,
Theyíve stopped taking crack.
Itís all thanks to you,
If only you knew.
If only you would have had that drink,
This is why we need to think.


LAURA WALKER    AGED 18!!
about a lad who was into loads of drugs, tried cocaine for the first time, he needed a drink but he wanted to carry on partying, got dehydrated and collapesd and died from dehydration.
this is not some i know and it is not a true story it is something i have made up in my head to put a message across.
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XonXtheXedgeX Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2006  Student Photographer
Hey that's good. It took me a while to read it though. I had gotten a bit confused at the start. It's good though, great job.

:D
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17fuk Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2006
hey thanx 4 the comment, so wot confused u on the start of the poem then? xXxXx
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XonXtheXedgeX Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2006  Student Photographer
I don't know. I guess I probably wasn't thinking straight at all. :giggle: ohh well :shrug:

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